American Legal History

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For my project I am focusing on Daniel Webster and the question of how he became “adopted” as it were by Wall Street, New York, and other disparate groups outside of New Hampshire, Massachusetts, and New England.
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Alex, this is very good, if a little chatty and personal at this stage. There are two revisions I'd like you to make:

First, as this is a project in legal history, I think it would be relevant to add some material on the legal papers of Daniel Webster, presently available in a dead-tree edition, for which you could provide an online TOC, looking to eventual use by other students in digitizing some or all of the papers for use in other projects.

Second, I think a less personal-to-Alex tone, with shorter more accessible paragraphing and maybe some sectional titles would make the piece more useful as a jumping off point for others. In keeping with a suggestion I'm making to everyone, I would be grateful if you would add a section with "points of attachment," that it, recommendations for other projects that lie alongside or attach to yours, that future students might consider taking up.

-- EbenMoglen - 04 Jan 2010

 
 
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