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<		To improve the essay, I tried to frame it. Revising the text, I found that beginning already pointed sufficienty towards the issue (the government’s "easy way out"), so I decided to leave it mostly unaltered and to add a new conclusion. In the Conclusion, I connect the findings of the text to paint the bigger picture. I hope you approve of the change! I’m looking forward to feedback on this second draft!
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>		To improve the essay, I tried to frame it. Revising the text, I found that beginning already pointed sufficienty towards the issue (the government’s "easy way out"), so I decided to leave it mostly unaltered and to add a new conclusion. In the Conclusion, I connect the findings of the text to paint the bigger picture.
 

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