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Reducing Violence in Chicago


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Violence in Urban Communities

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I. Gangs as a Form of Social Control

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I. Rethinking Approaches to Social Control

 
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Donald Black argues that law is one form of social control. He suggests that there exists an inverse relationship between law and other types of social control. The presence of elevated levels of violence in underprivileged communities in the inner city seems to suggest the lack of social control in such areas. Such an argument overlooks the complexities stemming from the heavy gang presence in many urban communities. The form of social control exercised by gangs oftentimes includes particular rules related to permissible attire, regulating access to particular blocks and alleys, and territorial markers via graffiti. The forms of social control exerted by gangs are oftentimes enforced through violence or the threat of violence.
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Donald Black argues that law is one form of social control. He suggests that there exists an inverse relationship between law and other types of social control. The presence of elevated levels of violence in many underprivileged neighborhoods in Chicago seems to indicate a lack of social control. Such a view overlooks the complexities stemming from the heavy gang presence in these areas. The forms of social control exercised by gangs oftentimes include particular rules related to permissible attire, regulating access to particular blocks and alleys, and territorial markers via graffiti. Gang social control is typically enforced through violence or the threat of violence.
 
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This is not to suggest that the law is nonexistent in communities with a large gang presence. Many cities have dedicated substantial resources, including additional police officers, to these communities. Many have also turned to surveillance technology to monitor gang activity and drug trafficking. Beginning in 2003, for instance, Chicago began installing “Police Observation Devices” (PODs) in intersections experiencing high rates of violence. On one hand, these devices may exemplify the introduction of more law in underprivileged communities because they allow the police to monitor the activity of individuals passing by the cameras for twenty-four hours a day. On the other hand, the cameras do not necessarily decrease gangs’ level of social control because gangs can simply conduct illicit activities, which are oftentimes linked to violence, in a more clandestine matter. For instance, gangs can move drug operations to another block and they can refrain from wearing gang colors. Overall, violent crime has not decreased much in Chicago since 2004 and many of the areas in close proximity to PODs continue to experience elevated levels of violence.
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This is not to suggest that the law is nonexistent in communities with a large gang presence. The Chicago Police Department has invested in surveillance technology to monitor gang activity and drug trafficking. Beginning in 2003, Chicago began installing “Police Observation Devices” (PODs) in intersections experiencing high rates of violence. These devices seem to exemplify the introduction of more law in underprivileged communities because they allow the police to monitor particular areas twenty-four hours a day. Gangs react by conducting illicit activities, which are oftentimes linked to violence, in a more clandestine matter in areas outside the cameras’ reach.
 
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II. Change, More of the Same

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Around the same time, a large number of Chicago gang leaders were prosecuted and sentenced to long prison terms. As the hierarchy was incarcerated, many large gangs split into smaller factions. As a result, the social control that gangs exercised over communities fundamentally changed. While crime rates dramatically decreased in some neighborhoods as they gentrified, the rates of violence in other communities has increased. Due to displacement stemming from policies of urban renewal and tearing down high-rise project complexes, many members of decentralized gangs moved to different neighborhoods in Chicago where there was already a gang presence. This helps explain why violent crime rates have worsened in parts of the South Side, West Side, and Northwest Side as overall crime rates have remained relatively stagnant in Chicago for the past decade.
 
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Many cities have responded to the violence that is far too common in underserved communities through policies of urban renewal. Between the late 1990s and the late 2000s the vast majority of the high-rise housing projects in Chicago were torn down. Lower-income Chicagoans were offered Section 8 vouchers to live either in mixed-income apartment buildings to be built where the housing projects previously stood or in other neighborhoods. Given the time it would take to build sufficient mixed-income housing for tens of thousands of people, most residents moved to affordable areas elsewhere in Chicago.
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A continued focus on surveillance technology investment and incarcerating Chicago gang leaders is not an effective solution. A better approach to reduce violence is to redirect some of these resources to community organizations that are dedicated to combating street violence. These groups tend to have programs aimed at-risk youth, a nuanced understanding geography of gangs in their neighborhoods, and substantial links to community leaders. The lack of funding oftentimes limits the effectiveness of such groups. Through modest reinvestment of existing resources, Chicago will empower community leaders and strengthen organizations dedicated to combating violence.
 
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Around the same time, a large number of Chicago gang leaders were prosecuted and sentenced to long prison terms. As the hierarchy was incarcerated, many large gangs split into smaller factions. As a result, the social control that gangs exercised over communities fundamentally changed. While the crime rates dramatically decreased in some neighborhoods as they gentrified, the rates of violence in other communities increased. Many members of decentralized gangs moved to different neighborhoods in Chicago where there was already a gang presence. This may help explain why violent crime rates have worsened in parts of the South Side, West Side, and Northwest Side as overall crime rates have remained relatively stagnant in Chicago for the past decade.
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III. Guns

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The fracture of formerly centralized gangs is especially worrisome given how easily gang members are able to access guns. Even though Chicago has very restrictive gun laws, they are nonetheless abundant in the city due to its close proximity to areas that have much more lax gun laws. For instance, more than 1,300 guns confiscated in Chicago between 2008 and 2013 were traced to Chuck’s Gun Shop, which is located only a few miles south of the city limits. Like many other cities, Chicago has stringent gun laws yet guns are far too common as they are easily accessible in surrounding areas.
 
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The fracture of formerly hierarchical gangs is especially worrisome given how easily gang members are able to access guns. Even though Chicago has very restrictive gun laws, they are nonetheless abundant in the city due to its close proximity to areas that have much more lax gun laws. For instance, more than 1,300 guns confiscated in Chicago between 2008 and 2013 were traced to Chuck’s Gun Shop, which is located only a few miles south of the city limits. Like many other cities, Chicago has stringent gun laws yet guns are far too common as they are easily accessible throughout the Chicagoland region.
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One approach address the link between the proliferation of guns and street violence is to advocate for uniform gun laws across the nation that would limit the flow of guns into Chicago from its surrounding areas. Another possibility is to continue with the current patchwork of laws which led to the situation in Chicago. The third potential approach is loosening gun control laws in Chicago to make it easier for city residents to legally obtain firearms. To a certain degree, the latter two approaches entail letting gun violence play out. Moreover, they overlook the fact that acts of violence are oftentimes manifestations of underlying societal issues played out through the use of guns.
 
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To address the violence plaguing many underprivileged urban communities, one option is to address the availability of guns. One approach is to advocate for uniform gun laws across the nation that would limit the flow of guns into cities from the surrounding areas. Unfortunately, given that there are approximately 300 million guns in the United States and the current political climate regarding gun laws, this does not seem to be a realistic option at the moment. Another possibility is to continue with the patchwork of laws that we currently have which led to situations akin to that present in Chicago. The third potential approach is to loosen gun control laws in cities to make it easier for city residents to legally obtain firearms. To a certain degree, the latter two approaches entail letting gun violence play out. These approaches overlook the fact that acts of violence are oftentimes manifestations of underlying societal issues played out through the use of guns.
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The first approach is the most attractive. Even though it does not address the fact that gang members already possess far too many guns, strong national gun laws could limit the continued flow of guns into city. Unfortunately, given the current political climate regarding gun laws, this does not seem to be a realistic option at the moment. Focusing on advocacy to shift the current political climate might be the most practical approach to guns because taking a good portion of them off the streets requires significant resources that the currently city does not have.
 
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IV. Looking Forward

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A better option to address violence in underprivileged communities is to address the deep socioeconomic inequalities entrenched in many cities throughout the United States. The acts of violence that are far too common in underserved areas are ultimately manifestations of inequality in segregated cities.. While there are compelling benefits in attacking the social control exercised by gangs, revitalizing neighborhoods through urban renewal, and regulating access to firearms, these strategies do not address the socioeconomic inequalities that are the root of the problem. As the socioeconomic conditions improve in underserved communities, fewer youth will be attracted to joining gangs, residents will have improved opportunities, and the levels of violence will likely decrease. By strategizing to comprehensively address underlying socioeconomic inequalities, it is likely that there will be a reduction in the forms of social control that far too often lend themselves to violence in urban communities.
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Overall, the ideal method to reduce violence in underprivileged communities is to address the deep socioeconomic inequalities entrenched in many cities throughout the United States. The acts of violence that are far too common in underserved Chicago communities are ultimately manifestations of inequality in an extremely segregated city. While there are compelling benefits to attacking the social control exercised by gangs, revitalizing neighborhoods through urban renewal, and regulating access to firearms, these strategies do not fundamentally alter the socioeconomic inequalities that are the root of the problem.
 
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A completely different essay, without much connection to law and therefore requiring both a different style of writing and of editing. I think the primary route to improvement here, however, would be to take the same approach that we took to the first draft at the strategy level: what is the primary idea the essay wishes to get across? Is the question, how to reduce street violence in Chicago? Or, what has happened to the political geography of gangs in Chicago? Or, why do urban police forces uniformly believe in strong national gun control?

The first question requires complex answers, or else a simple answer: more money. Why does Rahm Emmanuel risk his political existence by closing schools? Because Chicago cannot afford to educate its children. It also cannot afford to police its streets. Illinois cannot afford the pensions of its public servants, and its prisons have been mostly turned over to gangs. The very rich of New York City pay enough income taxes to provide almost the majority of New York State's income tax revenues over all. New York City is policed by the largest force run by the smartest police commissioner in the country. The very rich of Illinois elect Bruce Rauner the way the Koch's of Kansas, the Upper East Side and Nantucket bankroll Scott Walker next door. Chicago policing has been a joke throughout my lifetime and the lifetimes of several Daleys, a Byrne, an Emmanuel, and even an occasional Washington.

The second and third questions are easier but less rewarding to write about, because new ideas are harder to have even as the old ones are simpler to rewrite.

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Some of the policies that can address socioeconomic inequalities include assuring that affordable housing is being preserved or built in gentrifying neighborhoods, improving public transportation in communities that are far from the Loop, and reinvesting in neighborhood schools that have been closed or neglected. These solutions all require substantial investments during a time in which Chicago and Illinois are confronting a severe debt crisis. In the meantime, preventing the continued disintegration of gangs into competing factions, strengthening community organizations, empowering community leaders, and working to shift the political climate on gun control all represent steps in the right direction to reduce street violence. The ultimate goal, however, should focus on dedicating considerable resources to directly address the socioeconomic inequalities that are entrenched in Chicago.
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 A better option to address violence in underprivileged communities is to address the deep socioeconomic inequalities entrenched in many cities throughout the United States. The acts of violence that are far too common in underserved areas are ultimately manifestations of inequality in segregated cities.. While there are compelling benefits in attacking the social control exercised by gangs, revitalizing neighborhoods through urban renewal, and regulating access to firearms, these strategies do not address the socioeconomic inequalities that are the root of the problem. As the socioeconomic conditions improve in underserved communities, fewer youth will be attracted to joining gangs, residents will have improved opportunities, and the levels of violence will likely decrease. By strategizing to comprehensively address underlying socioeconomic inequalities, it is likely that there will be a reduction in the forms of social control that far too often lend themselves to violence in urban communities.

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A completely different essay, without much connection to law and therefore requiring both a different style of writing and of editing. I think the primary route to improvement here, however, would be to take the same approach that we took to the first draft at the strategy level: what is the primary idea the essay wishes to get across? Is the question, how to reduce street violence in Chicago? Or, what has happened to the political geography of gangs in Chicago? Or, why do urban police forces uniformly believe in strong national gun control?

The first question requires complex answers, or else a simple answer: more money. Why does Rahm Emmanuel risk his political existence by closing schools? Because Chicago cannot afford to educate its children. It also cannot afford to police its streets. Illinois cannot afford the pensions of its public servants, and its prisons have been mostly turned over to gangs. The very rich of New York City pay enough income taxes to provide almost the majority of New York State's income tax revenues over all. New York City is policed by the largest force run by the smartest police commissioner in the country. The very rich of Illinois elect Bruce Rauner the way the Koch's of Kansas, the Upper East Side and Nantucket bankroll Scott Walker next door. Chicago policing has been a joke throughout my lifetime and the lifetimes of several Daleys, a Byrne, an Emmanuel, and even an occasional Washington.

The second and third questions are easier but less rewarding to write about, because new ideas are harder to have even as the old ones are simpler to rewrite.

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Violence in Urban Communities


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I. Gangs as a Form of Social Control

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Donald Black argues that law is one form of social control. He suggests that there exists an inverse relationship between law and other types of social control. The presence of elevated levels of violence in underprivileged communities in the inner city seems to suggest the lack of social control in such areas. Such an argument overlooks the complexities stemming from the heavy gang presence in many urban communities. The form of social control exercised by gangs oftentimes includes particular rules related to permissible attire, regulating access to particular blocks and alleys, and territorial markers via graffiti. The forms of social control exerted by gangs are oftentimes enforced by violence or by the threat of violence.
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Donald Black argues that law is one form of social control. He suggests that there exists an inverse relationship between law and other types of social control. The presence of elevated levels of violence in underprivileged communities in the inner city seems to suggest the lack of social control in such areas. Such an argument overlooks the complexities stemming from the heavy gang presence in many urban communities. The form of social control exercised by gangs oftentimes includes particular rules related to permissible attire, regulating access to particular blocks and alleys, and territorial markers via graffiti. The forms of social control exerted by gangs are oftentimes enforced through violence or the threat of violence.
 
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This is not to suggest that the law is nonexistent in communities with a large gang presence. Many cities have dedicated substantial resources, including additional police officers, to these communities. Many have also turned to surveillance technology to monitor gang activity and drug trafficking. Beginning in 2003, for instance, Chicago began installing “Police Observation Devices” (PODs) in intersections experiencing high rates of violence. On one hand, these devices may exemplify the introduction of more law in underprivileged communities because they allow the police to monitor the activity of individuals passing by the cameras for twenty-four hours a day. On the other hand, the cameras do not necessarily decrease gangs’ level of social control because gangs can simply conduct illicit activities, which are oftentimes linked to violence, in a more clandestine matter. For instance, gangs can move drug operations to another block and they can refrain from wearing gang colors. Overall, violent crime has not decreased much in Chicago since 2004 and many of the areas in close proximity to PODs experience elevated levels of violence.
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This is not to suggest that the law is nonexistent in communities with a large gang presence. Many cities have dedicated substantial resources, including additional police officers, to these communities. Many have also turned to surveillance technology to monitor gang activity and drug trafficking. Beginning in 2003, for instance, Chicago began installing “Police Observation Devices” (PODs) in intersections experiencing high rates of violence. On one hand, these devices may exemplify the introduction of more law in underprivileged communities because they allow the police to monitor the activity of individuals passing by the cameras for twenty-four hours a day. On the other hand, the cameras do not necessarily decrease gangs’ level of social control because gangs can simply conduct illicit activities, which are oftentimes linked to violence, in a more clandestine matter. For instance, gangs can move drug operations to another block and they can refrain from wearing gang colors. Overall, violent crime has not decreased much in Chicago since 2004 and many of the areas in close proximity to PODs continue to experience elevated levels of violence.
 
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II. Transitioning Cities, More of the Same

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  Many cities have responded to the violence that is far too common in underserved communities through policies of urban renewal. Between the late 1990s and the late 2000s the vast majority of the high-rise housing projects in Chicago were torn down. Lower-income Chicagoans were offered Section 8 vouchers to live either in mixed-income apartment buildings to be built where the housing projects previously stood or in other neighborhoods. Given the time it would take to build sufficient mixed-income housing for tens of thousands of people, most residents moved to affordable areas elsewhere in Chicago.
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Around the same time, a large number of Chicago gang leaders were prosecuted and sentenced to long prison terms. As the hierarchy was incarcerated, many large gangs split into smaller factions. As a result, the social control that gangs exercised over communities fundamentally changed. While the crime rates dramatically decreased in some neighborhoods as they gentrified, the rates of violence in other communities increased. Many members of decentralized gangs moved to different neighborhoods in Chicago where there was already a gang presence. This may help explain why violent crime rates have worsened in parts of the South Side, West Side, and Northwest Side as overall crime rates have remained stagnant in Chicago for the past decade.
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Around the same time, a large number of Chicago gang leaders were prosecuted and sentenced to long prison terms. As the hierarchy was incarcerated, many large gangs split into smaller factions. As a result, the social control that gangs exercised over communities fundamentally changed. While the crime rates dramatically decreased in some neighborhoods as they gentrified, the rates of violence in other communities increased. Many members of decentralized gangs moved to different neighborhoods in Chicago where there was already a gang presence. This may help explain why violent crime rates have worsened in parts of the South Side, West Side, and Northwest Side as overall crime rates have remained relatively stagnant in Chicago for the past decade.
 

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The fracture of formerly hierarchical gangs is especially worrisome given how easily members of gangs are able to access guns. Even though Chicago has very restrictive gun laws, they are nonetheless abundant in the city due to its close proximity to areas that have much more lax gun laws. For instance, more than 1,300 guns confiscated in Chicago between 2008 and 2013 were traced to Chuck’s Gun Shop, which is located only a few miles south of the city limits. Like many other cities, Chicago has stringent gun laws yet guns are far too common as they are easily accessible throughout the Chicagoland region.
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The fracture of formerly hierarchical gangs is especially worrisome given how easily gang members are able to access guns. Even though Chicago has very restrictive gun laws, they are nonetheless abundant in the city due to its close proximity to areas that have much more lax gun laws. For instance, more than 1,300 guns confiscated in Chicago between 2008 and 2013 were traced to Chuck’s Gun Shop, which is located only a few miles south of the city limits. Like many other cities, Chicago has stringent gun laws yet guns are far too common as they are easily accessible throughout the Chicagoland region.
 
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To address the violence plaguing many underprivileged urban communities, one option is to address the availability of guns. One approach is to advocate for uniform gun laws across the nation that would limit the flow of guns into cities from the surrounding areas. Unfortunately, given that there are approximately 300 million guns in the United States and the current political climate regarding gun laws, this does not seem to be a realistic option at the moment. Another possibility is to continue with the patchwork of laws that we currently have which led to situations akin to that present in Chicago. The third potential approach is to loosen gun control laws in cities to make it easier for city residents to legally obtain firearms. To a certain degree, the latter two approaches entail letting gun violence play out. These approaches overlook the likelihood that acts of violence are manifestations of underlying societal issues played out through the use of guns.
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To address the violence plaguing many underprivileged urban communities, one option is to address the availability of guns. One approach is to advocate for uniform gun laws across the nation that would limit the flow of guns into cities from the surrounding areas. Unfortunately, given that there are approximately 300 million guns in the United States and the current political climate regarding gun laws, this does not seem to be a realistic option at the moment. Another possibility is to continue with the patchwork of laws that we currently have which led to situations akin to that present in Chicago. The third potential approach is to loosen gun control laws in cities to make it easier for city residents to legally obtain firearms. To a certain degree, the latter two approaches entail letting gun violence play out. These approaches overlook the fact that acts of violence are oftentimes manifestations of underlying societal issues played out through the use of guns.
 

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A better option to address violence in underprivileged communities is to address the deep socioeconomic inequalities entrenched in many cities throughout the United States. The acts of violence that are far too common in underserved areas are ultimately manifestations of inequality in extremely segregated cities.. While there are compelling benefits in attacking the social control exercised by gangs, revitalizing neighborhoods through urban renewal, and regulating access to firearms, these strategies do not address the socioeconomic inequalities that are the root of the problem. As the socioeconomic conditions improve in underserved communities, fewer youth will be attracted to joining gangs, residents will have improved opportunities, and the levels of violence may decrease. By strategizing to comprehensively address underlying socioeconomic inequalities, it is likely that there will be a reduction in the forms of social control that far too often lend themselves to violence in urban communities.
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A better option to address violence in underprivileged communities is to address the deep socioeconomic inequalities entrenched in many cities throughout the United States. The acts of violence that are far too common in underserved areas are ultimately manifestations of inequality in segregated cities.. While there are compelling benefits in attacking the social control exercised by gangs, revitalizing neighborhoods through urban renewal, and regulating access to firearms, these strategies do not address the socioeconomic inequalities that are the root of the problem. As the socioeconomic conditions improve in underserved communities, fewer youth will be attracted to joining gangs, residents will have improved opportunities, and the levels of violence will likely decrease. By strategizing to comprehensively address underlying socioeconomic inequalities, it is likely that there will be a reduction in the forms of social control that far too often lend themselves to violence in urban communities.
 

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 Donald Black argues that law is one form of social control. He suggests that there exists an inverse relationship between law and other types of social control. The presence of elevated levels of violence in underprivileged communities in the inner city seems to suggest the lack of social control in such areas. Such an argument overlooks the complexities stemming from the heavy gang presence in many urban communities. The form of social control exercised by gangs oftentimes includes particular rules related to permissible attire, regulating access to particular blocks and alleys, and territorial markers via graffiti. The forms of social control exerted by gangs are oftentimes enforced by violence or by the threat of violence.

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This is not to suggest that the law is nonexistent in communities with a large gang presence. Many cities have dedicated substantial resources, including additional police officers, to these communities. Many have also turned to surveillance technology to monitor gang activity and drug trafficking. Beginning in 2003, for instance, Chicago began installing “Police Observation Devices” (PODs) in intersections experiencing high rates of violence. On one hand, these devices may exemplify the introduction of more law in underprivileged communities because they allow the police to monitor the activity of individuals passing by the cameras for twenty-four hours a day. On the other hand, the cameras do not necessarily decrease gangs’ level of social control because gangs can simply conduct illicit activities, which are oftentimes linked to violence, in a more clandestine matter. For instance, gangs can move drug operations to another block and they can refrain from wearing gang colors. Overall, violent crime has not decreased much in Chicago since 2004 and many of the areas in close proximity to PODs experience elevated levels of violence.
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This is not to suggest that the law is nonexistent in communities with a large gang presence. Many cities have dedicated substantial resources, including additional police officers, to these communities. Many have also turned to surveillance technology to monitor gang activity and drug trafficking. Beginning in 2003, for instance, Chicago began installing “Police Observation Devices” (PODs) in intersections experiencing high rates of violence. On one hand, these devices may exemplify the introduction of more law in underprivileged communities because they allow the police to monitor the activity of individuals passing by the cameras for twenty-four hours a day. On the other hand, the cameras do not necessarily decrease gangs’ level of social control because gangs can simply conduct illicit activities, which are oftentimes linked to violence, in a more clandestine matter. For instance, gangs can move drug operations to another block and they can refrain from wearing gang colors. Overall, violent crime has not decreased much in Chicago since 2004 and many of the areas in close proximity to PODs experience elevated levels of violence.
 

II. Transitioning Cities, More of the Same


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This is not to suggest that the law is nonexistent in communities with a large gang presence. Many cities have dedicated substantial resources, including additional police officers, to these communities. Many have also turned to surveillance technology to monitor gang activity and drug trafficking. Beginning in 2003, for instance, Chicago began installing “Police Observation Devices” (PODs) in intersections experiencing high rates of violence. On one hand, these devices may exemplify the introduction of more law in underprivileged communities because they allow the police to monitor the activity of individuals passing by the cameras for twenty-four hours a day. On the other hand, the cameras do not necessarily decrease gangs’ level of social control because gangs can simply conduct illicit activities, which are oftentimes linked to violence, in a more clandestine matter. For instance, gangs can move drug operations to another block and they can refrain from wearing gang colors. Overall, violent crime has not decreased much in Chicago since 2004 and many of the areas in close proximity to PODs experience elevated levels of violence.
 
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Why don't you provide a link to this case that doesn't use a commercial service behind a paywall? Terry v. Ohio, 392 U.S. 1 (1968) is a more informative citation, and no one has to pay Westlaw to read the case. Do you see why the services want you to learn to do it wrong? Why do you let them?
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Is that what the case says? I thought the point was that "Where a reasonably prudent officer is warranted in the circumstances of a given case in believing that his safety or that of others is endangered, he may make a reasonable search for weapons of the person believed by him to be armed and dangerous regardless of whether he has probable cause to arrest that individual for crime or the absolute certainty that the individual is armed." 392 U.S. at 2-3 (syllabus). The crucial point is that the search extends no further than that necessary to protect the safety of the officer or others on the street. The constitutional logic is that this is a search incident to seizure, because a seizure occurs whenever someone is stopped on the street, and a pat-down is a search. The case is about whether the exclusionary rule bars the introduction of evidence resulting from the pat-down, which is always a question of whether the search was reasonable. The holding says that a search without probable cause to arrest is reasonable if it is an exterior pat-down for weapons given an "articulable suspicion" that the party stopped poses an immediate threat to the safety of the officer or others. Could a nation with 300 million handguns in circulation among its inhabitants not have such a rule?
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The officer is entitled to conduct a “limited search of the outer clothing of such persons in an attempt to discover weapons” if his or her reasonable fear is not dispelled quickly during the encounter. New York City is one of several cities in the United States to adopt a stop and frisk program. Per the New York City Police Department Patrol Guide in 1999, some of the factors used to establish the required reasonable suspicion to conduct a stop have included the time of day, the suspect’s demeanor, and the area where the stop occurs.

This is not about who gets searched, but rather about who gets stopped, which is not the subject of Terry, right?

The reasonable suspicion standard, which makes no overt reference to the race, ethnicity, or the individual’s background, plays out in ways that disproportionately affect minorities. Officers’ subconscious, and even conscious, biases are seemingly validated through the reliance on the officers’ personal experience and his or her fear. The data published in "‘Stop-and-Frisk’ Is All but Gone From New York" demonstrates that, as of 2010, 83% of the people stopped are African American or Latino even these groups only represent 51% of the population in New York City. Given the vacuous nature of the reasonable suspicious standard,

Why "vacuous"? Unless we find ourselves unable to trust the testimony of police—which is again another subject—a rule saying that "we will admit evidence arising from a street-encounter pat-down if the officer can articulate the reasons why she believed from her observations leading to the stop that the person she was stopping had a weapon and posed a threat" hardly seems "vacuous." We will get, as the Court had in the record in Terry, micronarratives of police experience. They will become stereotyped, as all testimony by repeat witness becomes stereotyped, but that isn't necessarily unfavorable to the task imposed on the courts by the Fourth Amendment, which is to decide what searching behavior at the point where the rubber meets the road for police trying to do their jobs and secure their safety is "reasonable."

it is essential that we turn to the social realities of stop and frisk to better deconstruct the program.

Would it not be sufficient to say "What this rule means is determined by who actually gets searched?" What does the rest of the paragraph, bar the cite, contribute, except the same confusion between stopping and searching?

II. Breading Resentment in Predominately Minority Communities

A recent study by the New York Times indicates that minority respondents believe that non-minorities are substantially favored in police interactions. “Stop and Frisk in Brownsville, Brooklyn” is demonstrative of the effects that the program has in minority communities. Even though the residents interviewed generally supported the police presence in the community, they felt that the police officers go too far in their stops. Residents are oftentimes stopped for petty offenses such was discarding a cigarette or spitting on a sidewalk. One resident received a ticket for trespass before actually entering the building where his cousin resided. Furthermore, officers routinely enter the lobbies of public housing buildings and stop residents for entering without a key even though the vast majority of the locks are broken.

This is not about who gets searched but about who gets stopped. That's exactly what Terry is not about, correct? This confusion is the central problem for the reader of the essay. You say you are discussing one matter, but you present the reader, paragraph after paragraph, with another.

The net effect of these stops is that minorities are discriminately burdened with arrests and citations for offenses that go unnoticed in the more privileged areas of New York City, especially when perpetrated by non-minorities.

Arrests and citations aren't perpetrated. This is a third topic, not about who gets stopped, or who gets searched, but about who gets arrested. Here the point seems to be that if a joint is found when someone is patted down for weapons, what might result is either an arrest or no arrest, but an arrest would have to be predicated on the admissibility of the joint, which in turn would depend on the articulable suspicion that the person who had only a joint and no weapon was armed and dangerous. It seems to me that if we had a large number of such cases in our courts (which would also require the assistance of prosecutors willing to move such things through the system), our problem would be that Terry is no longer the law, and that some other principle has displaced it in actuality. Otherwise it is hard to see how such evidence could be routinely admitted. So are we really talking about Terry at all?

The individuals least able to seek adequate representation and pay citations for trivial offenses, particularly those who reside in public housing, are being used as a funding mechanism to support the government’s inefficient use of resources.

This requires another set of facts to be shown, namely that the forms of enforcement being discussed are "revenue-positive" to a significant degree. This is probably proven about Ferguson, Mo. That it is even arguable, let alone not ludicrously backwards, with respect to New York or any other major city in the US requires at least some evidence. I have no reason to think it is in any way true. Do you?

Furthermore, these searches have a deep psychological impact on the individuals being searched. Former Mayor Michael Bloomberg has argued that “Scaring the kids not to carry guns is one of the integral parts” of stop and frisk. Mayor Bloomberg overlooks the fact that the vast majority of stops do not result in the discovery of illegal objects. Rather then leading teenagers and young adults to believe that the police are present to protect them, they are subjected to humiliating interactions with officers where they are treated as criminals.

Is what the former mayor of New York says about policing law? If so, the collection of things said over the years by Rudy Giuliani eclipses in offensiveness and stupidity the remarks of Chairman Bloomberg by some hundreds to one, and makes one really big pile of unconstitutional you know what. But I'm not sure what either of them has to do with anything.

III. Creating Feelings of Security Through the “Other”

"The New York Police: A Dangerous Moment" describes a scene where dozens of tourists stepped out of their luxury buses to attend the Abyssinian Baptist Church in a gentrifying Harlem. Supporters of the stop and frisk program argue that police tactics have resulted in the decrease in crime in neighborhoods such as Harlem. In defense of the program, Mayor Bloomberg pointed out that minorities are disproportionately stopped because they are more likely to commit crimes.

This would not admit a toothpick, or a lump of heroin as large as a canteloupe, into evidence if Terry is the relevant law, right? Once again, we are depending on stuff someone says who isn't a lawyer or a policeman. (In arguing against social privilege, it's odd that you seem to think we should care about things Chairman Bloomberg says, when his primary argument for either running or commenting on New York City matters is that he is rich and competent and we should let him.)

Many individuals are stopped and frisked on the basis of petty violations at an enormous expenditure of resources.

Once more, just for the variety, may I point out that they cannot be frisked on the basis of petty violations unless you are talking about law that isn't Terry? Now we are in the world of search incident to arrest, with probable cause. Terry is out of the picture. The admissibility of evidence produced by a search incident to an arrest supported by probable cause is still constitutionally limited. Riley v. California shows us that those limits—to the zone of objects under the immediate control of the defendant, for the dual purposes of securing the safety of the arresting officer and to prevent destruction of evidence—remain practically meaningful.

Rather than being aimed at confiscating guns, which are seized in only 0.15% of stops, the purpose of these stops is to create and perpetuate a feeling of safety in New York City where the “Other” is being kept in control. Perhaps this feeling of security created through controlling the “Other” is why the tourists were willing to visit a late 1990s Harlem in luxury buses. As Gilberto Gerena Valentin, president of the Congress of Puerto Rican Home Towns commented in 1964, “The police do not protect us. They try to keep us in line. They run the West Side like a plantation.” In this matter, stop and frisk serves as a mechanism of social control aimed at minorities.

"Stop and frisk" is now a synonym for "policing." That's the tendency towards which the draft's diffuse argumentation has been leading, but it's not the right place to go.

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To address the violence plaguing many underprivileged urban communities, one option is to address the availability of guns. One approach is to advocate for uniform gun laws across the nation that would limit the flow of guns into cities from the surrounding areas. Unfortunately, given that there are approximately 300 million guns in the United States and the current political climate regarding gun laws, this does not seem to be a realistic option at the moment. Another possibility is to continue with the patchwork of laws that we currently have which led to situations akin to that present in Chicago. The third potential approach is to loosen gun control laws in cities to make it easier for city residents to legally obtain firearms. To a certain degree, the latter two approaches entail letting gun violence play out. These approaches overlook the likelihood that acts of violence are manifestations of underlying societal issues played out through the use of guns.
 

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Can it seriously be argued that any police department and prosecutorial service believe themselves legally justified (or, in a city of millions, materially capable) of implementing such a strategy? I can imagine an agitator making this statement from atop a soap box, or on some "social media" equivalent, but it's a flagrantly false description of how a police commissioner, a mayor, or the district attorney of New York, Kings or Bronx counties actually goes about her job. Why would you predicate your credibility with the reader on her willingness to grant you this assertion?

The effect of such programs is that young individuals from underprivileged backgrounds are burdened with arrest records and citations for the same behavior that is overlooked in more prosperous areas.

This is "the effect" of a particular policing style? I think this is a social universal, true of all societies at all times, which Donald Black, in The Behavior of Law (1976), from which we're going to do some reading shortly, perfectly describes. Whether these "programs" do or don't exist, whether we are talking about US policing under the Bill of Rights or any other system, place and time, an equivalent inequality will be present. If that's right, what is your actual argument?

Even though the number of stops has dropped in New York City from 337,410 during the first six months of 2012 to 33,699 stops during the last half of 2013, stop and frisk is representative of the far-too-common leveraging of the criminal justice system to prevent society from learning about crime. Rather, the system is being used to perpetuate feelings of security through acts of social control against the “Other.”

Society is not arranged into the dichotomy of "Self" and "Other." Social stratification and morphology are complex. A reader likely to be sympathetic to your social position is also likely to be aware of that complexity, and is therefore precisely the reader most likely to be chafed by the oversimplification. Both the legal and the sociological analyses suffer from the same tendency to drift away from precision towards breadth of gesture. An essay succeeds in the end not by being loud, but by being clear.

This is the stage where the route to improvement lies through better editing. At the idea level, you haven't been asking the skeptical questions sentence by sentence and paragraph by paragraph. At the word level, you haven't made sure every word was in place, correctly spelled, and that unnecessary words or words unwashed have been dismissed. The looseness in the argument needs to be treated by reconstruction rather than revision. Is this about Terry, about searches, about arrest patterns, about the philosophy of community policing? Whatever the core idea of the essay turns out to be in the next draft, it should be clearly stated in the introduction, carefully developed through the body of the draft, with due attention to the most important questions or objections the skeptical reader will have, sentence by sentence, as she passes through. The conclusion should give that reader a chance to take your idea further, under her own steam: you should show her the implications of the idea and give her what it takes to explore them for herself.

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A better option to address violence in underprivileged communities is to address the deep socioeconomic inequalities entrenched in many cities throughout the United States. The acts of violence that are far too common in underserved areas are ultimately manifestations of inequality in extremely segregated cities.. While there are compelling benefits in attacking the social control exercised by gangs, revitalizing neighborhoods through urban renewal, and regulating access to firearms, these strategies do not address the socioeconomic inequalities that are the root of the problem. As the socioeconomic conditions improve in underserved communities, fewer youth will be attracted to joining gangs, residents will have improved opportunities, and the levels of violence may decrease. By strategizing to comprehensively address underlying socioeconomic inequalities, it is likely that there will be a reduction in the forms of social control that far too often lend themselves to violence in urban communities.
 

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Why don't you provide a link to this case that doesn't use a commercial service behind a paywall? Terry v. Ohio, 392 U.S. 1 (1968) is a more informative citation, and no one has to pay Westlaw to read the case. Do you see why the services want you to learn to do it wrong? Why do you let them?

affirmed the constitutionality, under the Fourth Amendment, of stop and frisk encounters where a police officer “observes unusual conduct which leads him to reasonably to conclude in light of his experience” that dangerous criminal conduct may be in progress.

Is that what the case says? I thought the point was that "Where a reasonably prudent officer is warranted in the circumstances of a given case in believing that his safety or that of others is endangered, he may make a reasonable search for weapons of the person believed by him to be armed and dangerous regardless of whether he has probable cause to arrest that individual for crime or the absolute certainty that the individual is armed." 392 U.S. at 2-3 (syllabus). The crucial point is that the search extends no further than that necessary to protect the safety of the officer or others on the street. The constitutional logic is that this is a search incident to seizure, because a seizure occurs whenever someone is stopped on the street, and a pat-down is a search. The case is about whether the exclusionary rule bars the introduction of evidence resulting from the pat-down, which is always a question of whether the search was reasonable. The holding says that a search without probable cause to arrest is reasonable if it is an exterior pat-down for weapons given an "articulable suspicion" that the party stopped poses an immediate threat to the safety of the officer or others. Could a nation with 300 million handguns in circulation among its inhabitants not have such a rule?

The officer is entitled to conduct a “limited search of the outer clothing of such persons in an attempt to discover weapons” if his or her reasonable fear is not dispelled quickly during the encounter. New York City is one of several cities in the United States to adopt a stop and frisk program. Per the New York City Police Department Patrol Guide in 1999, some of the factors used to establish the required reasonable suspicion to conduct a stop have included the time of day, the suspect’s demeanor, and the area where the stop occurs.

This is not about who gets searched, but rather about who gets stopped, which is not the subject of Terry, right?

The reasonable suspicion standard, which makes no overt reference to the race, ethnicity, or the individual’s background, plays out in ways that disproportionately affect minorities. Officers’ subconscious, and even conscious, biases are seemingly validated through the reliance on the officers’ personal experience and his or her fear. The data published in "‘Stop-and-Frisk’ Is All but Gone From New York" demonstrates that, as of 2010, 83% of the people stopped are African American or Latino even these groups only represent 51% of the population in New York City. Given the vacuous nature of the reasonable suspicious standard,

Why "vacuous"? Unless we find ourselves unable to trust the testimony of police—which is again another subject—a rule saying that "we will admit evidence arising from a street-encounter pat-down if the officer can articulate the reasons why she believed from her observations leading to the stop that the person she was stopping had a weapon and posed a threat" hardly seems "vacuous." We will get, as the Court had in the record in Terry, micronarratives of police experience. They will become stereotyped, as all testimony by repeat witness becomes stereotyped, but that isn't necessarily unfavorable to the task imposed on the courts by the Fourth Amendment, which is to decide what searching behavior at the point where the rubber meets the road for police trying to do their jobs and secure their safety is "reasonable."

it is essential that we turn to the social realities of stop and frisk to better deconstruct the program.

Would it not be sufficient to say "What this rule means is determined by who actually gets searched?" What does the rest of the paragraph, bar the cite, contribute, except the same confusion between stopping and searching?

II. Breading Resentment in Predominately Minority Communities

  A recent study by the New York Times indicates that minority respondents believe that non-minorities are substantially favored in police interactions. “Stop and Frisk in Brownsville, Brooklyn” is demonstrative of the effects that the program has in minority communities. Even though the residents interviewed generally supported the police presence in the community, they felt that the police officers go too far in their stops. Residents are oftentimes stopped for petty offenses such was discarding a cigarette or spitting on a sidewalk. One resident received a ticket for trespass before actually entering the building where his cousin resided. Furthermore, officers routinely enter the lobbies of public housing buildings and stop residents for entering without a key even though the vast majority of the locks are broken.
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This is not about who gets searched but about who gets stopped. That's exactly what Terry is not about, correct? This confusion is the central problem for the reader of the essay. You say you are discussing one matter, but you present the reader, paragraph after paragraph, with another.

The net effect of these stops is that minorities are discriminately burdened with arrests and citations for offenses that go unnoticed in the more privileged areas of New York City, especially when perpetrated by non-minorities.

Arrests and citations aren't perpetrated. This is a third topic, not about who gets stopped, or who gets searched, but about who gets arrested. Here the point seems to be that if a joint is found when someone is patted down for weapons, what might result is either an arrest or no arrest, but an arrest would have to be predicated on the admissibility of the joint, which in turn would depend on the articulable suspicion that the person who had only a joint and no weapon was armed and dangerous. It seems to me that if we had a large number of such cases in our courts (which would also require the assistance of prosecutors willing to move such things through the system), our problem would be that Terry is no longer the law, and that some other principle has displaced it in actuality. Otherwise it is hard to see how such evidence could be routinely admitted. So are we really talking about Terry at all?

The individuals least able to seek adequate representation and pay citations for trivial offenses, particularly those who reside in public housing, are being used as a funding mechanism to support the government’s inefficient use of resources.

This requires another set of facts to be shown, namely that the forms of enforcement being discussed are "revenue-positive" to a significant degree. This is probably proven about Ferguson, Mo. That it is even arguable, let alone not ludicrously backwards, with respect to New York or any other major city in the US requires at least some evidence. I have no reason to think it is in any way true. Do you?

 Furthermore, these searches have a deep psychological impact on the individuals being searched. Former Mayor Michael Bloomberg has argued that “Scaring the kids not to carry guns is one of the integral parts” of stop and frisk. Mayor Bloomberg overlooks the fact that the vast majority of stops do not result in the discovery of illegal objects. Rather then leading teenagers and young adults to believe that the police are present to protect them, they are subjected to humiliating interactions with officers where they are treated as criminals.
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III. Creating Feelings of Security Through the “Other”

"The New York Police: A Dangerous Moment" describes a scene where dozens of tourists stepped out of their luxury buses to attend the Abyssinian Baptist Church in a gentrifying Harlem. Supporters of the stop and frisk program argue that police tactics have resulted in the decrease in crime in neighborhoods such as Harlem. In defense of the program, Mayor Bloomberg pointed out that minorities are disproportionately stopped because they are more likely to commit crimes.

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This would not admit a toothpick, or a lump of heroin as large as a canteloupe, into evidence if Terry is the relevant law, right? Once again, we are depending on stuff someone says who isn't a lawyer or a policeman. (In arguing against social privilege, it's odd that you seem to think we should care about things Chairman Bloomberg says, when his primary argument for either running or commenting on New York City matters is that he is rich and competent and we should let him.)

Many individuals are stopped and frisked on the basis of petty violations at an enormous expenditure of resources.

Once more, just for the variety, may I point out that they cannot be frisked on the basis of petty violations unless you are talking about law that isn't Terry? Now we are in the world of search incident to arrest, with probable cause. Terry is out of the picture. The admissibility of evidence produced by a search incident to an arrest supported by probable cause is still constitutionally limited. Riley v. California shows us that those limits—to the zone of objects under the immediate control of the defendant, for the dual purposes of securing the safety of the arresting officer and to prevent destruction of evidence—remain practically meaningful.

Rather than being aimed at confiscating guns, which are seized in only 0.15% of stops, the purpose of these stops is to create and perpetuate a feeling of safety in New York City where the “Other” is being kept in control. Perhaps this feeling of security created through controlling the “Other” is why the tourists were willing to visit a late 1990s Harlem in luxury buses. As Gilberto Gerena Valentin, president of the Congress of Puerto Rican Home Towns commented in 1964, “The police do not protect us. They try to keep us in line. They run the West Side like a plantation.” In this matter, stop and frisk serves as a mechanism of social control aimed at minorities.

"Stop and frisk" is now a synonym for "policing." That's the tendency towards which the draft's diffuse argumentation has been leading, but it's not the right place to go.

 

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The assumption underlying stop and frisk, along with other forms of broken windows policy, is a dangerous one: incredibly minor transgressions from individuals pertaining to an underserved segment of the population must be ruthlessly pursued to prevent future criminality.

Can it seriously be argued that any police department and prosecutorial service believe themselves legally justified (or, in a city of millions, materially capable) of implementing such a strategy? I can imagine an agitator making this statement from atop a soap box, or on some "social media" equivalent, but it's a flagrantly false description of how a police commissioner, a mayor, or the district attorney of New York, Kings or Bronx counties actually goes about her job. Why would you predicate your credibility with the reader on her willingness to grant you this assertion?

The effect of such programs is that young individuals from underprivileged backgrounds are burdened with arrest records and citations for the same behavior that is overlooked in more prosperous areas.

This is "the effect" of a particular policing style? I think this is a social universal, true of all societies at all times, which Donald Black, in The Behavior of Law (1976), from which we're going to do some reading shortly, perfectly describes. Whether these "programs" do or don't exist, whether we are talking about US policing under the Bill of Rights or any other system, place and time, an equivalent inequality will be present. If that's right, what is your actual argument?

Even though the number of stops has dropped in New York City from 337,410 during the first six months of 2012 to 33,699 stops during the last half of 2013, stop and frisk is representative of the far-too-common leveraging of the criminal justice system to prevent society from learning about crime. Rather, the system is being used to perpetuate feelings of security through acts of social control against the “Other.”

Society is not arranged into the dichotomy of "Self" and "Other." Social stratification and morphology are complex. A reader likely to be sympathetic to your social position is also likely to be aware of that complexity, and is therefore precisely the reader most likely to be chafed by the oversimplification. Both the legal and the sociological analyses suffer from the same tendency to drift away from precision towards breadth of gesture. An essay succeeds in the end not by being loud, but by being clear.
 
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The reasonable suspicion standard, which makes no overt reference to the race, ethnicity, or the individual’s background, plays out in ways that disproportionately affect minorities. Officers’ subconscious, and even conscious, biases are seemingly validated through the reliance on the officers’ personal experience and his or her fear. The data published in "‘Stop-and-Frisk’ Is All but Gone From New York" demonstrates that, as of 2010, 83% of the people stopped are African American or Latino even these groups only represent 51% of the population in New York City. Given the vacuous nature of the reasonable suspicious standard, it is essential that we turn to the social realities of stop and frisk to better deconstruct the program.
 

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A recent study by the New York Times indicates that minority respondents believe that non-minorities are substantially favored in police interactions. “Stop and Frisk in Brownsville, Brooklyn” is demonstrative of the effects that the program has in minority communities. Even though the residents interviewed generally supported the police presence in the community, they felt that the police officers go too far in their stops. Residents are oftentimes stopped for petty offenses such was discarding a cigarette or spitting on a sidewalk. One resident received a ticket for trespass before actually entering the building where his cousin resided. Furthermore, officers routinely enter the lobbies of public housing buildings and stop residents for entering without a key even though the vast majority of the locks are broken.

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The net effect of these stops is that minorities are discriminately burdened with arrests and citations for offenses that go unnoticed in the more privileged areas of New York City, especially when perpetrated by non-minorities. The individuals least able to seek adequate representation and pay citations for trivial offenses, particularly those who reside in public housing, are being used as a funding mechanism to support the government’s inefficient use of resources.
 Furthermore, these searches have a deep psychological impact on the individuals being searched. Former Mayor Michael Bloomberg has argued that “Scaring the kids not to carry guns is one of the integral parts” of stop and frisk. Mayor Bloomberg overlooks the fact that the vast majority of stops do not result in the discovery of illegal objects. Rather then leading teenagers and young adults to believe that the police are present to protect them, they are subjected to humiliating interactions with officers where they are treated as criminals.
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Many individuals are stopped and frisked on the basis of petty violations at an enormous expenditure of resources. Rather than being aimed at confiscating guns, which are seized in only 0.15% of stops, the purpose of these stops is to create and perpetuate a feeling of safety in New York City where the “Other” is being kept in control. Perhaps this feeling of security created through controlling the “Other” is why the tourists were willing to visit a late 1990s Harlem in luxury buses. As Gilberto Gerena Valentin, president of the Congress of Puerto Rican Home Towns commented in 1964, “The police do not protect us. They try to keep us in line. They run the West Side like a plantation.” In this matter, stop and frisk serves as a mechanism of social control aimed at minorities.
 
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The assumption underlying stop and frisk, along with other forms of broken windows policy, is a dangerous one: incredibly minor transgressions from individuals pertaining to an underserved segment of the population must be ruthlessly pursued to prevent future criminality. The effect of such programs is that young individuals from underprivileged backgrounds are burdened with arrest records and citations for the same behavior that is overlooked in more prosperous areas. Even though the number of stops has dropped in New York City from 337,410 during the first six months of 2012 to 33,699 stops during the last half of 2013, stop and frisk is representative of the far-too-common leveraging of the criminal justice system to prevent society from learning about crime. Rather, the system is being used to perpetuate feelings of security through acts of social control against the “Other.”

 
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Deconstructing Stop and Frisk

-- By ChrisMendez - 13 Mar 2015

I. The Reasonable Suspicion Standard

The United States Supreme Court in Terry v. Ohio affirmed the constitutionality, under the Fourth Amendment, of stop and frisk programs when a police officer “observes unusual conduct which leads him to reasonably to conclude in light of his experience” that dangerous criminal conduct might be in progress. The officer is entitled to conduct a “limited search of the outer clothing of such persons in an attempt to discover weapons” if his or her reasonable fear is not dispelled quickly during the encounter. New York City is one of several cities in the United States to adopt a stop and frisk program. Per the New York City Police Department Patrol Guide, some of the factors used to establish the required reasonable suspicion to conduct a stop have included the time of day, the suspect’s demeanor, and the area where the stop occurs.

The reasonable suspicion standard, which makes no overt reference to the race, ethnicity, or the individual’s background, plays out in ways that disproportionately affect minorities. Officers’ subconscious, and even conscious, biases are seemingly validated by through the reliance on the officers’ personal experience and his or her fear. The data published in ‘Stop-and-Frisk’ Is All but Gone From New York demonstrates that, as of 2010, 83% of the people stopped are African American and Latino even they only represent 51% of the population in New York City. Given the vacuous nature of the reasonable suspicious standard, it is essential that we turn to the social realities of stop and frisk to better deconstruct the program.

II. Breading Resentment in Predominately Minority Communities

A recent study by the New York Times indicates that minority respondents believe that non-minorities are substantially favored in police interactions. “Stop and Frisk in Brownsville, Brooklyn” is demonstrative of the effects that the program has in minority communities. Even though the residents interviewed generally supported the police presence in the community, they felt that the police officers go too far in their stops. Residents are oftentimes stopped for petty offenses such was discarding a cigarette or spitting on a sidewalk. One resident received a ticket for trespass before actually entering the building where his cousin resided. Furthermore, officers routinely enter the lobbies of public housing buildings and stop residents for entering without a key even though the vast majority of the locks are broken.

The net effect of these stops is that minorities are discriminately burdened with arrests and citations for offenses that go unnoticed in the more privileged areas of New York City, especially when perpetrated by non-minorities. The individuals, particularly those who reside in public housing, least able to seek adequate representation and afford to pay citations for trivial offenses are being essentially being used as a funding mechanism to support the government’s inefficient use of resources.

Furthermore, these searches have a deep psychological impact on the individuals being searched. Former Mayor Michael Bloomberg has argued that “Scaring the kids not to carry guns is one of the integral parts” of stop and frisk. Mayor Bloomberg overlooks the fact that the vast majority of stops do not result in the discovery of illegal objects. Rather then leading teenagers and young adults to believe that the police are present to protect them, they are subjected to humiliating interactions with officers where they are treated as criminals.

III. Creating Feelings of Securing Through the “Other”

The New York Police: A dangerous moment describes a scene where dozens of tourists stepped out of their luxury buses to attend the Abyssinian Baptist Church in a gentrifying Harlem. Supporters of the stop and frisk program argue that police tactics have resulted in the decrease in crime in neighborhoods such as Harlem. In defense of the program, Mayor Bloomberg pointed out that minorities are disproportionately stopped because they are more likely to commit crimes.

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