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I wasn’t certain about what kind of lawyer I wanted to be when I first decided to come to law school. In many ways I’m still not exactly sure where I want to be in five years; however, I am constantly learning about what kind of lawyer I do not want to be. The idea of “pawning” my license for the illusion of security definitely isn’t what I want to do with my legal career. So for me, a large part of my journey through my first year is finding out what I want to do (not just what I don’t.) Unfortunately, many of my first-year classes have been unhelpful in this pursuit. I want to have a positive impact on my community, to be able to support my family, and to become a role model for younger people. The question is how can I achieve all of these with my legal career?
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WHAT KIND OF LAWYER I WANT TO BE

I want to have a positive impact on my community, to be able to support my family, and to become a role model for younger people. The role that lawyers played in the civil rights movement sparked my interest in becoming a lawyer. The possibility of working towards something that I actually believe in seemed like the perfect way to lead a meaningful life. Ultimately, I have to do something that I feel is worthwhile.
 
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Meaningful Work

The role that lawyers played in the civil rights movement sparked my interest in becoming a lawyer. The possibility of working towards something that I actually believe in seemed like the perfect way to lead a meaningful life. However, there is no job position entitled “Thurgood Marshall” or “Charles Hamilton Houston” so I have to determine what is the best way to work towards something that I feel is meaningful. Is it joining an established organization such as the American Civil Liberties Union or the N.A.A.C.P Legal Defense Fund? Does a position in those organizations mean I’m simply a cog in someone else’s machine? Does it matter if it’s a machine whose purpose I believe in? These are all questions that I will consider during my time in law school and throughout the early years of my career. Ultimately, I have to do something that I feel is worthwhile.
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Although it isn’t something that I had given much thought when entering law school, or something that seemed to be given much attention by law school faculty, it may be a god idea to have my own practice at some point in my legal career. This would mean more financial resources but also more sense of ownership and accomplishment. The work would be mine. Like Robinson in Lawrence Joseph’s Lawyerland, I’d be able to avoid being used more than I’m willing to be used. Like many law students, a large student debt looms in the wake of my law school graduation. Although I don’t dream about owning large yachts and expensive Hublot watches, I would like to be able to support my family financially. Growing up I didn’t know any lawyers personally. One goal for me is to be a mentor to younger members of my community. Part of me being a positive influence to young people means more than perpetuating the stereotype that all lawyers have money. It isn’t enough to show the youth that if they work hard that they can attain material things. Instead, I want the young people in my community to know that if they work hard, that they can change the environment in which they live.
 
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WHAT I NEED FROM LAW SCHOOL

Having figured out what kind of lawyer I want to be, the next step involves me finding out how to get what I need from my law school experience. Having endeavored to spend a great deal of money, one might expect law schools to pull out all the stops in ensuring that no student feels dissatisfied with the experience of learning to become a lawyer. One may also naively take for granted that law school will in fact teach you how to be a lawyer. However, one of the most consistent responses from upper-year students, professors, and practicing attorneys, when asked about how law school teaches someone to become a lawyer is how little law school prepares one for the actual work of being a lawyer. “Experience” and “hands-on” learning are repeatedly praised as the real means of learning how to become a good lawyer. (Contrary to popular belief watching “Law & Order” was not the most popular response). So then my question becomes how can I ensure that I get my money worth? The more I consider this line of thought, the more I realize that like much of the rest of society, law school is being offered as more of a self-serve industry rather than a heavily customer service based enterprise (self-checkout in supermarkets, the prevalence of ATMs as opposed to direct teller interactions, subway metro card vending machines replacing clerks). So, my job will consist of, amongst other things, being proactive in acquiring hands-on learning experiences and building my professional network.

DEVELOPING SKILLS TO BUILD MY PRACTICE

In law school I will need to develop skills to practice by engaging in meaningful work outside of the classroom. This means that summer employment isn’t just about scoring an impressive sounding gig that will put a few dollars in my pocket. Instead I need to approach my summer employment with the watchful eye of an apprentice. For ten weeks I should be watching the attorneys to learn what to do, what not to do, and how to improve upon my skills. This also means asking more questions and worrying less about looking clueless.

This summer I will work at the U.S. Department of Education Office for Civil Rights New York Office. The work is right in line with the filed that I hope to work in. Therefore, aside from improving writing and research skills, I will be watching to understand how lawyers think about issues that are heavily policy driven. Working with lawyers in my field of choice also means that along with every moment being a learning experience, it is also an opportunity to build my network (more about that later).

I will also have to find hands on employment and clinics that will propel me into the field that I would like to go into. This means asking around about different programs, engaging with professors and pinpointing opportunities. I must strategically approach these opportunities as ways to craft my skills.

DEVELOPING MY NETWORK TO BUILD MY PRACTICE

Along with utilizing the school’s resources to find meaningful experiences outside of the classroom (and not totally unrelated), one of the most valuable aspects of law school will be building my professional network. Professors, alumni, other students are all potential members of my network. I have to seek them out; they won’t come looking for me. Finding professors and practicing lawyers that are in a position to help and are happy to do so can help me to succeed and grow my practice. Therefore, office hours and lunchtime panels are not simply opportunities to ask a substantive question or get free lunch. Instead, opportunities to speak with individuals who can serve as good connections later on is more like strategic planning for the future.

While law school is undoubtedly too expensive, this serves as even more motivation to get what I need from my time here. Although it would be lovely to have these necessities laid out in front of me like an omelet bar, reality necessitates that I be proactive in finding these opportunities for myself. To be optimistic about the situation, and to defy what countless others think about the institution, law school actually can be viewed as adequate preparation for a legal career. If you want what’s best for yourself, it may be a good idea to get used to being in the driver’s seat as opposed to merely being a passenger.

 
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Financial Security

It is a common perception (and perhaps a reality) that jobs engaged in doing meaningful public interest work don’t pay well. See http://www.nalp.org/sept2010pubintsal. Although it isn’t something that I had given much thought when entering law school, or something that seemed to be given much attention by law school faculty, it may be a god idea to have my own practice at some point in my legal career. This would mean more financial resources but also more sense of ownership and accomplishment. The work would be mine. Like Robinson in Lawrence Joseph’s Lawyerland, I’d be able to avoid being used more than I’m willing to be used. Like many law students, a large student debt looms in the wake of my law school graduation. Although I don’t dream about owning large yachts and expensive Hublot watches See(Hublot Watch Price List), I would like to be able to support my family financially. Part of my journey in discovering what lawyer I want to be will have to take into account my ability to help my family financially, and although my decision will not be based solely on what decision gives me the most money, it is something that I have to consider.
 

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Role Model

My last major decision is more about the person that I want to be rather than the career that I want to have. Growing up I didn’t know any lawyers personally. One goal for me is to be a mentor to younger members of my community. Part of me being a positive influence to young people means more than perpetuating the stereotype that all lawyers have money. It isn’t enough to show the youth that if they work hard that they can attain material things. Instead, I want the young people in my community to know that if they work hard, that they can change the environment in which they live. Therefore, I will have to lead by example.
 
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Considering all of these things that I want out of my future legal career, I am still left wondering how I accomplish all of this. It is clear that the options prevalent in the Columbia Law School culture won’t satisfy all of my desires. Joining a large law firm and “making money” just won’t cut it for me. Joining a well-known public interest organization could be partially satisfying but may not be quite enough. One definite floating in this pool of uncertainties is that along the way I will need to develop the skills to be a great lawyer, so that I have the option to choose a career path that I want to choose and not one that I must choose.
 
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Professor Moglen frequently mentions that students should develop the skills necessary to earn a living as a lawyer, not through “pawning off” one’s license, but through establishing one’s own practice. I must admit that the sense of freedom and accomplishment that would come from having my own practice is attractive. It may be a possible solution to my yearnings to do meaningful work while also making enough money to support my family financially. There is a possibility that I am the lawyer of the future that Moglen speaks about only pawning off a share of my license to an employer, while reserving the rest for my own practice. Nonetheless, I have lots to figure out before I get where I am going.
 
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It isn't a bad first draft; it's a perfectly sound and well-expressed prologue to the second draft. Which, rather than rewriting it, picks up where it leaves off.
 
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The thought process that brings you to the end of the current draft establishes the personal context in which you need to design the rest of your legal education. You've done a good job thinking about how your educational requirements grow out of your personal background and professional aspirations. You've gotten to the perfect next point of departure: "I'm going to need plenty of something in order to equip myself for what I intend to do." Now you need to make it a question: "What do I need from law school in order to equip myself for what I intend to do?" Taking that question as seriously as you took the ones that got you here is the excellent second draft.
 
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Pool of Uncertainty (Bad First Draft)

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 Professor Moglen frequently mentions that students should develop the skills necessary to earn a living as a lawyer, not through “pawning off” one’s license, but through establishing one’s own practice. I must admit that the sense of freedom and accomplishment that would come from having my own practice is attractive. It may be a possible solution to my yearnings to do meaningful work while also making enough money to support my family financially. There is a possibility that I am the lawyer of the future that Moglen speaks about only pawning off a share of my license to an employer, while reserving the rest for my own practice. Nonetheless, I have lots to figure out before I get where I am going.
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It isn't a bad first draft; it's a perfectly sound and well-expressed prologue to the second draft. Which, rather than rewriting it, picks up where it leaves off.

The thought process that brings you to the end of the current draft establishes the personal context in which you need to design the rest of your legal education. You've done a good job thinking about how your educational requirements grow out of your personal background and professional aspirations. You've gotten to the perfect next point of departure: "I'm going to need plenty of something in order to equip myself for what I intend to do." Now you need to make it a question: "What do I need from law school in order to equip myself for what I intend to do?" Taking that question as seriously as you took the ones that got you here is the excellent second draft.

 
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Pool of Uncertainty (Bad First Draft)

-- By ChristopherWilds - 25 Feb 2013

I wasn’t certain about what kind of lawyer I wanted to be when I first decided to come to law school. In many ways I’m still not exactly sure where I want to be in five years; however, I am constantly learning about what kind of lawyer I do not want to be. The idea of “pawning” my license for the illusion of security definitely isn’t what I want to do with my legal career. So for me, a large part of my journey through my first year is finding out what I want to do (not just what I don’t.) Unfortunately, many of my first-year classes have been unhelpful in this pursuit. I want to have a positive impact on my community, to be able to support my family, and to become a role model for younger people. The question is how can I achieve all of these with my legal career?

Meaningful Work

The role that lawyers played in the civil rights movement sparked my interest in becoming a lawyer. The possibility of working towards something that I actually believe in seemed like the perfect way to lead a meaningful life. However, there is no job position entitled “Thurgood Marshall” or “Charles Hamilton Houston” so I have to determine what is the best way to work towards something that I feel is meaningful. Is it joining an established organization such as the American Civil Liberties Union or the N.A.A.C.P Legal Defense Fund? Does a position in those organizations mean I’m simply a cog in someone else’s machine? Does it matter if it’s a machine whose purpose I believe in? These are all questions that I will consider during my time in law school and throughout the early years of my career. Ultimately, I have to do something that I feel is worthwhile.

Financial Security

It is a common perception (and perhaps a reality) that jobs engaged in doing meaningful public interest work don’t pay well. See http://www.nalp.org/sept2010pubintsal. Although it isn’t something that I had given much thought when entering law school, or something that seemed to be given much attention by law school faculty, it may be a god idea to have my own practice at some point in my legal career. This would mean more financial resources but also more sense of ownership and accomplishment. The work would be mine. Like Robinson in Lawrence Joseph’s Lawyerland, I’d be able to avoid being used more than I’m willing to be used. Like many law students, a large student debt looms in the wake of my law school graduation. Although I don’t dream about owning large yachts and expensive Hublot watches See(Hublot Watch Price List), I would like to be able to support my family financially. Part of my journey in discovering what lawyer I want to be will have to take into account my ability to help my family financially, and although my decision will not be based solely on what decision gives me the most money, it is something that I have to consider.

Role Model

My last major decision is more about the person that I want to be rather than the career that I want to have. Growing up I didn’t know any lawyers personally. One goal for me is to be a mentor to younger members of my community. Part of me being a positive influence to young people means more than perpetuating the stereotype that all lawyers have money. It isn’t enough to show the youth that if they work hard that they can attain material things. Instead, I want the young people in my community to know that if they work hard, that they can change the environment in which they live. Therefore, I will have to lead by example.

How do I get these?

Considering all of these things that I want out of my future legal career, I am still left wondering how I accomplish all of this. It is clear that the options prevalent in the Columbia Law School culture won’t satisfy all of my desires. Joining a large law firm and “making money” just won’t cut it for me. Joining a well-known public interest organization could be partially satisfying but may not be quite enough. One definite floating in this pool of uncertainties is that along the way I will need to develop the skills to be a great lawyer, so that I have the option to choose a career path that I want to choose and not one that I must choose.

Professor Moglen frequently mentions that students should develop the skills necessary to earn a living as a lawyer, not through “pawning off” one’s license, but through establishing one’s own practice. I must admit that the sense of freedom and accomplishment that would come from having my own practice is attractive. It may be a possible solution to my yearnings to do meaningful work while also making enough money to support my family financially. There is a possibility that I am the lawyer of the future that Moglen speaks about only pawning off a share of my license to an employer, while reserving the rest for my own practice. Nonetheless, I have lots to figure out before I get where I am going.


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