Law in Contemporary Society

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This essay feels bare to me. I’ve tried to revise it many times but I am not sure where the deficiency lies. My goal was to produce a writing similar to Lawyerland, however, I believe I have missed the mark. Lawyerland has layers producing a literature that is at once simple and complex, humorous and sobering. This writing seems to be one-dimensional. I’ve had other people read this and some like it. Others say the problem is trying to copy another author’s style without adding originality. With that being said, although I requested a grade, I look forward to reading your comments to see if they illuminate a way forward with respect to improving my style.
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