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 Dear Eben, Please disregard my previous second draft as it did not say what I meant. I have been thinking about and struggling with the ideas expressed here and it took me awhile to write something that I was satisfied with. Thank you for forgiving the lateness of this draft and I look forward to your comments.

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Dear Eben, Please disregard my previous second draft as it did not say what I meant. I have been thinking about and struggling with the ideas expressed here and it took me awhile to write something that I was satisfied with. Thank you for forgiving the lateness of this draft and I look forward to your comments.
 
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The Study of the Law

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How to study the law

 
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The study of law would be benefited by studying it more expansively and considering it as part of a series of systems (moral, legal, political, etc.) that influence current and future human behavior. Law is most powerfully studied when considering it as the changes of behavior that are influenced by beliefs (both collective and individual) about what the law actually is.
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I have been struggling with law school. I find the casebook method to be pedagogically flawed and frustrating. I came to law school thinking we would start with a review of different theories regarding what is the law and then move on to specific areas of the law. Instead we read cases in what appears to be an attempt to teach what law is by looking at how previous courts have answered specific legal questions. There have been some essays about varying legal theories, but little overall categorization of the questions that confront the student of the law and how others through history and in other societies have answered these questions.
 
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Law is a based upon belief: A Locked Door

If people (society as a collective whole) believe (or merely act as though they believe) in some legal principle then the legal principle exists, but only because people act as though it does.
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The purpose of this paper is to determine a way for me to approach the study of the law.
 
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Imagine a crowd of people in a room with one door. If they all believe that the door is locked and don't attempt to open the door then the impact is the same as if the door is actually locked. This is like the law. If people believe that the door is locked then they act as though it is locked.
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What is the law? --> The law is what courts do.

“The prophecies of what the courts will do in fact, and nothing more pretentious, are what I mean by the law.”
 
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When studying the law it is important to look at not just what a legal code says or even how courts interpret that legal code, but also to examine what people do. Legal principles cannot accurate predict or explain human behavior, although they shape it. That is not to say that what courts say is the meaning of a legal code has no impact, or that how a legal code is written does not or should not influence the how a court interprets that code. When a judge writes a decision that says that women have a right to an abortion and then health care professionals believe that the decision means that they can provide abortions and a woman comes to their clinic and gets an abortion then for that woman an abortion was available; for that woman an abortion was available. The way that a court read a legal code influenced the behavior of many actors that led to the outcome.
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Holmes’ quote encapsulates a way of thinking about the law that seems sensible to me. Put another way, law is what courts do in fact, and the practice of law is predicting what courts will do.
 
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There is the argument that belief is not what matters, actions are what matters, and I agree. But belief is convenient shorthand for the convictions (conscious and unconscious) that lead to action. People act for any number of reasons: they have a moral belief that they should follow the law, they are afraid of jail or a fine, they are conforming to social norms. It doesn't matter why they act.
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Therefore, the study of the law is the empirical study of prior court behavior and then predicting future court behavior based on prior behavior. There are three related questions that must be answered. (1) What is a court? (2) How to determine how courts will behave? (3) What impact does the behavior of the courts have on society? The third question can be considered as a way to consider what courts should do.
 
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If the law is how we act then the law is politics is economics is psychology is history is anthropology. It's all the study of the same thing: human behavior and human behavior is most effectively studied as the product of variables often that can be analyzed in systematic ways.
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What is a court? --> A court is a means of dealing with conflicts in society through institutions.

 
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Law is a series of systems: A Stop Sign

The written law is not the only, or often, the most powerful influence on human action. It is also helpful to consider the other factors that are traditionally overlooked in a legal education.
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One way to look at this is that courts are a means of deciding conflicts between individuals in a systematic way through institutions staffed by people. This is a very broad definition of a court (I wish that I had learned in law school of different ways to answer this question, but alas, I have not). Different societies throughout history have had ‘courts’ in various ways: tribal elders, church leaders, formal legal organizations, etc.
 
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Consider a stop sign. There are effectively two choices: stop or don't stop. Let's say there is a $50 fine for not stopping. If an individual runs a stop sign and no one sees her then the 'law' is transgressed, but there are no repercussions.
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How do courts behave? --> Courts are made of people, thus court behavior is determined by human behavior.

 
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In effect, for that individual there was no $50 fine. Another individual chooses to stop at the stop sign. Again, for her there was no $50 fine, no repercussions. If you are considering law as only impacts you could conclude from this that there is no law: that the law is only the enforcement of that law and if the law is followed or transgressed without punishment then the law does not exist, because there was no action.
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Courts are staffed by people, thus court action is a product of human behavior, although they both influence each other. Courts do what people do and what people do is influenced by what courts do. Therefore, the current actions of courts impact the current and future actions of courts. In this respect law is somewhat like culture. We create culture, but culture also creates us.
 
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Which might very well be true if you consider only the $50 fine as the law. But if you broaden your consideration and think of the law not as the words or the principle to be transgressed or not transgressed (the punishment avoided or punishment received), but as the decision (both individually and collectively) to stop or not stop then the $50 fine is not the end of the analysis, but the beginning. The question then becomes how does the overall legal code regarding stop signs impact whether people's behavior at a stop sign
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This means that studying the behavior of courts requires both the study of human behavior in general and the behavior of courts in particular. If the law is human behavior then how to understand human behavior? There is no definitive answer to this question. I think the study should focus on how humans behave, and not why they behave the way they do (even though the two are interconnected and speculation on the latter is helpful for predicting the former), because to a focus it is easier to empirically observe actions.
 
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The power of a legal system and a written legal code is that it shapes human behavior. It doesn't determine whether an individual stops or doesn't stop, but it influences it. For instance, where the stop sign is places has an enormous impact on whether or not people stop. If it's hard to see, or blue instead of red, or on an abandoned country road then people are much less likely to stop. Thus, the shape of a stop sign is the law, or part of the law. It's part of the system that makes each individual stop or not stop.
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Given the complicated nature of society (and thus nearly infinite numbers of variables that influence human behavior) and the unknown (and perhaps unknowable) workings of the mind it is difficult if not impossible to predict human actions exactly. However, predictions can be made at both the individual level and at the aggregate level. Understanding human behavior is similar to understanding the ripples of a rock thrown into a pond. It is impossible to predict the exact height, distance, and power of each ripple, but is possible to predict that there will be ripples.
 
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The behavior of a single individual is aggregated thousands of times, millions, and thus you have stop signs (which in the US are mostly obeyed): a vast network of social, personal, political, economic and legal decisions that cause individuals to act in a certain way.
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Definitive predictions cannot be made but a range of likely outcomes can be discerned. These outcomes can be roughly thought of as bell curves, some outcomes are more likely and some are less. Consider this overly simplistic example: the child of a janitor is much more likely to be a janitor than a banker and the child of a banker is much more likely to be a banker than a janitor.
 
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The law both influences these determinations and is influenced by them. Continuing the example, the child of the banker is likely to remain a banker for many reasons, but some of them are created by the behavior of courts in enforcing laws such as those that allow for property taxes to pay for local schools, thus allowing wealthy families to have more money available to pay for education for their children. Furthermore, the banker child will have greater political and social capital to impact what laws are created and how courts behave than the janitor child, thus continuing the legal system that allowed the banker child to have wealth in the first place.
 
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How to study (and possibly change) the impact of courts on human behavior? --> Law should study the range of possible outcomes that can occur from court behavior.

 
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To study the law and to just study how courts work and what judges say is to limit our understanding of the law, and in turn limit our ability to impact society. The law should be the study of how legal language, mechanisms, and institutions influence systems of human behavior.
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Law is human behavior and human behavior leads to the creation of the law and human behavior is infinitely complex, but not entirely unpredictable. Since human behavior is based upon a series of bell curves of more or less likely outcomes the impact of courts can be studied by looking at what is the likely range of outcomes and if those outcomes are not ideal then considering ways to change the position of those bell curves to more socially ideal levels.
 
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We stand on the cusp of a new wave of understanding of human behavior which is fueled by the greater understanding the neurology of the brain, the availability of big data, and computers powerful enough to analyze all this data. The law should be a part of this movement by focusing study on how legal language, mechanisms, and institutions influence systems of human behavior.
 
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A Locked Door

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There is no law other than what people believe to be the law, or more precisely, law doesn't exist outside of the changes of behavior that are influenced by individuals' (both collectively and on a personal level) belief of what a law is.

I don't understand this statement. It seems not to take account of the State's monopoly of force.

What we think of as 'law' is a series of systems (moral, legal, political, etc.) that influence current and future human behavior.

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The study of law would be benefited by studying it more expansively and considering it as part of a series of systems (moral, legal, political, etc.) that influence current and future human behavior. Law is most powerfully studied when considering it as the changes of behavior that are influenced by beliefs (both collective and individual) about what the law actually is.
 

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Imagine a crowd of people in a room with one door. If they all believe that the door is locked and don't attempt to open the door then the impact is the same as if the door is actually locked.

Over what period of time? The door is only locked if, in the long run, when somebody finally tries to open it, it won't open. A question not actively being investigated has not been answered.

This is like the law. If people believe that the door is locked then they act as though it is locked. If people (society as a collective whole) believe (or merely act as though they believe) in some legal principle then the legal principle exists, but only because people act as though it does.

Certainly not. Everyone in Manhattan behaves as though the "don't walk" sign meant "don't walk unless you want to." This is not actually the law. Every merchant in Manhattan behaves as though all sales were final. This is not the law either. In most of the United States, speed limit signs are universally understood to apply only to other people. This is nowhere at all the law. Almost everyone in the English speaking world thinks "finders keepers." This is exactly opposite to the law almost everywhere.

Far more technically interesting and perfect examples could be given. More importantly, it could be shown convincingly that the opposite of your premise is an absolute requirement for the existence of any actual legal system.

Therefore, what a legal code says is not what dictates the law, nor even how courts interpret that legal code. What matters is what people do. Thus abortions are not legal or illegal they are available or unavailable, marijuana is smoked as medicine or burned by the police, people are put to death by the state or they are not. What we think of as the law is really the impact of millions of actions by individuals. That is not to say that what courts say is the meaning of a legal code has no impact, or that how a legal code is written does not or should not influence the how a court interprets that code. When a judge writes a decision that says that women have a right to an abortion and then health care professionals believe that the decision means that they can provide abortions and a woman comes to their clinic and gets an abortion then for that woman an abortion was available; for that woman abortion was the law.

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If people (society as a collective whole) believe (or merely act as though they believe) in some legal principle then the legal principle exists, but only because people act as though it does.
 
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Imagine a crowd of people in a room with one door. If they all believe that the door is locked and don't attempt to open the door then the impact is the same as if the door is actually locked. This is like the law. If people believe that the door is locked then they act as though it is locked.
 
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This isn't very helpfully expressed. Abortion for that woman was a choice. But in the course of the analysis you jumble several jural entities into the word "law," which is where the confusion comes from. A little Hohfeldian Analysis would probably help. In this case, the "right to an abortion" is a Hohfeldian immunity against state-imposed limitations that pose an "undue burden" on getting an abortion, but not a Hohfeldian power to impose a duty to provide abortions on any individual or corporate entity, and a Hohfeldian no-right to receive any form of state-provided health care insurance or benefit that would pay for abortion-related services. This can be determined on a purely formal basis, from the judicial decisions and statutory provisions, and requires no resort to behavioral data of any kind.

There is the argument that belief is not what matters, actions are what matters, and I agree. But belief is convenient shorthand for the convictions (conscious and unconscious) that lead to action. People act for any number of reasons: they have a moral belief that they should follow the law, they are afraid of jail or a fine, they are conforming to social norms. It doesn't matter why they act. What matters is how they act.

Matters for which purpose?
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When studying the law it is important to look at not just what a legal code says or even how courts interpret that legal code, but also to examine what people do. Legal principles cannot accurate predict or explain human behavior, although they shape it. That is not to say that what courts say is the meaning of a legal code has no impact, or that how a legal code is written does not or should not influence the how a court interprets that code. When a judge writes a decision that says that women have a right to an abortion and then health care professionals believe that the decision means that they can provide abortions and a woman comes to their clinic and gets an abortion then for that woman an abortion was available; for that woman an abortion was available. The way that a court read a legal code influenced the behavior of many actors that led to the outcome.
 
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There is the argument that belief is not what matters, actions are what matters, and I agree. But belief is convenient shorthand for the convictions (conscious and unconscious) that lead to action. People act for any number of reasons: they have a moral belief that they should follow the law, they are afraid of jail or a fine, they are conforming to social norms. It doesn't matter why they act.
 If the law is how we act then the law is politics is economics is psychology is history is anthropology. It's all the study of the same thing: human behavior and human behavior is most effectively studied as the product of variables often that can be analyzed in systematic ways.
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In multiple systematic ways, which will be at variance. That's the point of seeking consilience.

 

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The written law is not the only, or often, the most powerful influence on human action. It is also helpful to consider the other factors that are traditionally overlooked in a legal education.
 Consider a stop sign. There are effectively two choices: stop or don't stop. Let's say there is a $50 fine for not stopping. If an individual runs a stop sign and no one sees her then the 'law' is transgressed, but there are no repercussions.
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Not true if there are cameras, correct?

  In effect, for that individual there was no $50 fine. Another individual chooses to stop at the stop sign. Again, for her there was no $50 fine, no repercussions. If you are considering law as only impacts you could conclude from this that there is no law: that the law is only the enforcement of that law and if the law is followed or transgressed without punishment then the law does not exist, because there was no action.
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Which might very well be true if you consider only the $50 fine as the law. But if you broaden your consideration and think of the law not as the words or the principle to be transgressed or not transgressed (the punishment avoided or punishment received), but as the decision (both individually and collectively) to stop or not stop then the $50 fine is not the end of the analysis, but the beginning. The question then becomes how does the overall legal code regarding stop signs impact whether people's behavior at a stop sign
 
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Over what period of time? In the long run you would observe the consequences of enforcement, whatever they may be. You would then discover also the correlation between behavior at this STOP sign and behavior at the other STOP sign in this two-horse town. Over there, the cops park a couple hours a day, and bust everyone who runs. The cops, you see, noticed the same correlation, because cops are not stupid and they live on the street. They realized long ago that they didn't have to stake out both STOP signs to ensure perfect enforcement. Pretty soon you realize that what you observed back in your first hour at STOP sign #1 gave you a lousy understanding of the situation, and that—as William James put it—truth is what the investigators are fated to agree upon in the long run. Your graf above is at fault for trying to see the world in the blink of an eye.

Which might very well be true if you consider only the $50 fine as the law. But if you broaden your consideration and think of the law not as the words or the principle to be transgressed or not transgressed (the punishment avoided or punishment received), but as the decision (both individually and collectively) to stop or not stop then the $50 fine is not the end of the analysis, but the beginning. The question then becomes how does a $50 impact whether or not people stop or don't stop.

My friend the econodwarf would here explain to you that you're at fault for talking about "$50." If you replace that with "$50 times the expected probability of apprehension," everything will work just fine. In this instance, the econodwarf can be tested empirically, with interesting results you might want to look for. The cops parked over at STOP sign #2 know very well that it isn't the $50: it's the points on the license. Anything that increases the probability of loss of driving privileges (which can mean loss of livelihood for a worker) is to be avoided far more than the monetary penalty.

You run the stop sign or you don't run the stop sign: the power of a legal system and a written legal code is that it shapes whether or not you run the stop sign. It doesn't determine whether an individual stops or doesn't stop, but it influences it. The written law is not the only, or often, the most powerful influence on human action. For instance, where the stop sign is places has an enormous impact on whether or not people stop. If it's hard to see, or blue instead of red, or on an abandoned country road then people are much less likely to stop. Thus, the shape of a stop sign is the law, or part of the law. It's part of the system that makes each individual stop or not stop.

This whole paragraph could be summarized as: "Law is a comparatively weak form of social control." So?

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The power of a legal system and a written legal code is that it shapes human behavior. It doesn't determine whether an individual stops or doesn't stop, but it influences it. For instance, where the stop sign is places has an enormous impact on whether or not people stop. If it's hard to see, or blue instead of red, or on an abandoned country road then people are much less likely to stop. Thus, the shape of a stop sign is the law, or part of the law. It's part of the system that makes each individual stop or not stop.
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 To study the law and to just study how courts work and what judges say is to limit our understanding of the law, and in turn limit our ability to impact society. The law should be the study of how legal language, mechanisms, and institutions influence systems of human behavior.
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I think the best way to strengthen the essay is to get absolutely clear and precise about the central idea. Let's put it in a sentence, and put that sentence at the top of the next draft. Let's use the rest of the first graf to show the reader why it's important. Development and illustration of the idea may well use material from the existing draft, but I have a hunch the context would feel rather different. The conclusion should give the reader a way of taking the idea further under her own steam. It's all in here, but you need to be more precise about quarrying it out.

 
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A Locked Door

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There is no law other than what people believe to be the law, or more precisely, law doesn't exist outside of the changes of behavior that are influenced by individuals' (both collectively and on a personal level) belief of what a law is.

I don't understand this statement. It seems not to take account of the State's monopoly of force.

What we think of as 'law' is a series of systems (moral, legal, political, etc.) that influence current and future human behavior.

 

Law is a based upon belief: A Locked Door

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Imagine a crowd of people in a room with one door. If they all believe that the door is locked and don’t attempt to open the door then the impact is the same as if the door is actually locked.
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Imagine a crowd of people in a room with one door. If they all believe that the door is locked and don't attempt to open the door then the impact is the same as if the door is actually locked.

Over what period of time? The door is only locked if, in the long run, when somebody finally tries to open it, it won't open. A question not actively being investigated has not been answered.

 This is like the law. If people believe that the door is locked then they act as though it is locked. If people (society as a collective whole) believe (or merely act as though they believe) in some legal principle then the legal principle exists, but only because people act as though it does.
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Certainly not. Everyone in Manhattan behaves as though the "don't walk" sign meant "don't walk unless you want to." This is not actually the law. Every merchant in Manhattan behaves as though all sales were final. This is not the law either. In most of the United States, speed limit signs are universally understood to apply only to other people. This is nowhere at all the law. Almost everyone in the English speaking world thinks "finders keepers." This is exactly opposite to the law almost everywhere.

Far more technically interesting and perfect examples could be given. More importantly, it could be shown convincingly that the opposite of your premise is an absolute requirement for the existence of any actual legal system.

 Therefore, what a legal code says is not what dictates the law, nor even how courts interpret that legal code. What matters is what people do. Thus abortions are not legal or illegal they are available or unavailable, marijuana is smoked as medicine or burned by the police, people are put to death by the state or they are not. What we think of as the law is really the impact of millions of actions by individuals. That is not to say that what courts say is the meaning of a legal code has no impact, or that how a legal code is written does not or should not influence the how a court interprets that code. When a judge writes a decision that says that women have a right to an abortion and then health care professionals believe that the decision means that they can provide abortions and a woman comes to their clinic and gets an abortion then for that woman an abortion was available; for that woman abortion was the law.
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There is the argument that belief is not what matters, actions are what matters, and I agree. But belief is convenient shorthand for the convictions (conscious and unconscious) that lead to action. People act for any number of reasons: they have a moral belief that they should follow the law, they are afraid of jail or a fine, they are conforming to social norms. It doesn’t matter why they act. What matters is how they act.
 
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If the law is how we act then the law is politics is economics is psychology is history is anthropology. It’s all the study of the same thing: human behavior and human behavior is most effectively studied as the product of variables often that can be analyzed in systematic ways.
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This isn't very helpfully expressed. Abortion for that woman was a choice. But in the course of the analysis you jumble several jural entities into the word "law," which is where the confusion comes from. A little Hohfeldian Analysis would probably help. In this case, the "right to an abortion" is a Hohfeldian immunity against state-imposed limitations that pose an "undue burden" on getting an abortion, but not a Hohfeldian power to impose a duty to provide abortions on any individual or corporate entity, and a Hohfeldian no-right to receive any form of state-provided health care insurance or benefit that would pay for abortion-related services. This can be determined on a purely formal basis, from the judicial decisions and statutory provisions, and requires no resort to behavioral data of any kind.

There is the argument that belief is not what matters, actions are what matters, and I agree. But belief is convenient shorthand for the convictions (conscious and unconscious) that lead to action. People act for any number of reasons: they have a moral belief that they should follow the law, they are afraid of jail or a fine, they are conforming to social norms. It doesn't matter why they act. What matters is how they act.

Matters for which purpose?

If the law is how we act then the law is politics is economics is psychology is history is anthropology. It's all the study of the same thing: human behavior and human behavior is most effectively studied as the product of variables often that can be analyzed in systematic ways.

In multiple systematic ways, which will be at variance. That's the point of seeking consilience.

 

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Consider a stop sign. There are effectively two choices: stop or don’t stop. Let’s say there is a $50 fine for not stopping. If an individual runs a stop sign and no one sees her then the ‘law’ is transgressed, but there are no repercussions. In effect, for that individual there was no $50 fine. Another individual chooses to stop at the stop sign. Again, for her there was no $50 fine, no repercussions. If you are considering law as only impacts you could conclude from this that there is no law: that the law is only the enforcement of that law and if the law is followed or transgressed without punishment then the law does not exist, because there was no action. Which might very well be true if you consider only the $50 fine as the law. But if you broaden your consideration and think of the law not as the words or the principle to be transgressed or not transgressed (the punishment avoided or punishment received), but as the decision (both individually and collectively) to stop or not stop then the $50 fine is not the end of the analysis, but the beginning. The question then becomes how does a $50 impact whether or not people stop or don’t stop.
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Consider a stop sign. There are effectively two choices: stop or don't stop. Let's say there is a $50 fine for not stopping. If an individual runs a stop sign and no one sees her then the 'law' is transgressed, but there are no repercussions.

Not true if there are cameras, correct?

In effect, for that individual there was no $50 fine. Another individual chooses to stop at the stop sign. Again, for her there was no $50 fine, no repercussions. If you are considering law as only impacts you could conclude from this that there is no law: that the law is only the enforcement of that law and if the law is followed or transgressed without punishment then the law does not exist, because there was no action.

Over what period of time? In the long run you would observe the consequences of enforcement, whatever they may be. You would then discover also the correlation between behavior at this STOP sign and behavior at the other STOP sign in this two-horse town. Over there, the cops park a couple hours a day, and bust everyone who runs. The cops, you see, noticed the same correlation, because cops are not stupid and they live on the street. They realized long ago that they didn't have to stake out both STOP signs to ensure perfect enforcement. Pretty soon you realize that what you observed back in your first hour at STOP sign #1 gave you a lousy understanding of the situation, and that—as William James put it—truth is what the investigators are fated to agree upon in the long run. Your graf above is at fault for trying to see the world in the blink of an eye.

Which might very well be true if you consider only the $50 fine as the law. But if you broaden your consideration and think of the law not as the words or the principle to be transgressed or not transgressed (the punishment avoided or punishment received), but as the decision (both individually and collectively) to stop or not stop then the $50 fine is not the end of the analysis, but the beginning. The question then becomes how does a $50 impact whether or not people stop or don't stop.

My friend the econodwarf would here explain to you that you're at fault for talking about "$50." If you replace that with "$50 times the expected probability of apprehension," everything will work just fine. In this instance, the econodwarf can be tested empirically, with interesting results you might want to look for. The cops parked over at STOP sign #2 know very well that it isn't the $50: it's the points on the license. Anything that increases the probability of loss of driving privileges (which can mean loss of livelihood for a worker) is to be avoided far more than the monetary penalty.

You run the stop sign or you don't run the stop sign: the power of a legal system and a written legal code is that it shapes whether or not you run the stop sign. It doesn't determine whether an individual stops or doesn't stop, but it influences it. The written law is not the only, or often, the most powerful influence on human action. For instance, where the stop sign is places has an enormous impact on whether or not people stop. If it's hard to see, or blue instead of red, or on an abandoned country road then people are much less likely to stop. Thus, the shape of a stop sign is the law, or part of the law. It's part of the system that makes each individual stop or not stop.

This whole paragraph could be summarized as: "Law is a comparatively weak form of social control." So?
 
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You run the stop sign or you don’t run the stop sign: the power of a legal system and a written legal code is that it shapes whether or not you run the stop sign. It doesn’t determine whether an individual stops or doesn’t stop, but it influences it. The written law is not the only, or often, the most powerful influence on human action. For instance, where the stop sign is places has an enormous impact on whether or not people stop. If it’s hard to see, or blue instead of red, or on an abandoned country road then people are much less likely to stop. Thus, the shape of a stop sign is the law, or part of the law. It’s part of the system that makes each individual stop or not stop.
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I think the best way to strengthen the essay is to get absolutely clear and precise about the central idea. Let's put it in a sentence, and put that sentence at the top of the next draft. Let's use the rest of the first graf to show the reader why it's important. Development and illustration of the idea may well use material from the existing draft, but I have a hunch the context would feel rather different. The conclusion should give the reader a way of taking the idea further under her own steam. It's all in here, but you need to be more precise about quarrying it out.

 
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A Locked Door

-- By HollyStubbs - 26 Feb 2013

There is no law

There is no law other than what people believe to be the law, or more precisely, law doesn’t exist outside of the changes of behavior that are influenced by individuals’ (both collectively and on a personal level) belief of what a law is. What we think of as ‘law’ is a series of systems (moral, legal, political, etc.) that influence current and future human behavior.

Law is a based upon belief: A Locked Door

Imagine a crowd of people in a room with one door. If they all believe that the door is locked and don’t attempt to open the door then the impact is the same as if the door is actually locked.

This is like the law. If people believe that the door is locked then they act as though it is locked. If people (society as a collective whole) believe (or merely act as though they believe) in some legal principle then the legal principle exists, but only because people act as though it does. Therefore, what a legal code says is not what dictates the law, nor even how courts interpret that legal code. What matters is what people do. Thus abortions are not legal or illegal they are available or unavailable, marijuana is smoked as medicine or burned by the police, people are put to death by the state or they are not. What we think of as the law is really the impact of millions of actions by individuals. That is not to say that what courts say is the meaning of a legal code has no impact, or that how a legal code is written does not or should not influence the how a court interprets that code. When a judge writes a decision that says that women have a right to an abortion and then health care professionals believe that the decision means that they can provide abortions and a woman comes to their clinic and gets an abortion then for that woman an abortion was available; for that woman abortion was the law.

There is the argument that belief is not what matters, actions are what matters, and I agree. But belief is convenient shorthand for the convictions (conscious and unconscious) that lead to action. People act for any number of reasons: they have a moral belief that they should follow the law, they are afraid of jail or a fine, they are conforming to social norms. It doesn’t matter why they act. What matters is how they act.

If the law is how we act then the law is politics is economics is psychology is history is anthropology. It’s all the study of the same thing: human behavior and human behavior is most effectively studied as the product of variables often that can be analyzed in systematic ways.

Law is a series of systems: A Stop Sign

Consider a stop sign. There are effectively two choices: stop or don’t stop. Let’s say there is a $50 fine for not stopping. If an individual runs a stop sign and no one sees her then the ‘law’ is transgressed, but there are no repercussions. In effect, for that individual there was no $50 fine. Another individual chooses to stop at the stop sign. Again, for her there was no $50 fine, no repercussions. If you are considering law as only impacts you could conclude from this that there is no law: that the law is only the enforcement of that law and if the law is followed or transgressed without punishment then the law does not exist, because there was no action. Which might very well be true if you consider only the $50 fine as the law. But if you broaden your consideration and think of the law not as the words or the principle to be transgressed or not transgressed (the punishment avoided or punishment received), but as the decision (both individually and collectively) to stop or not stop then the $50 fine is not the end of the analysis, but the beginning. The question then becomes how does a $50 impact whether or not people stop or don’t stop.

You run the stop sign or you don’t run the stop sign: the power of a legal system and a written legal code is that it shapes whether or not you run the stop sign. It doesn’t determine whether an individual stops or doesn’t stop, but it influences it. The written law is not the only, or often, the most powerful influence on human action. For instance, where the stop sign is places has an enormous impact on whether or not people stop. If it’s hard to see, or blue instead of red, or on an abandoned country road then people are much less likely to stop. Thus, the shape of a stop sign is the law, or part of the law. It’s part of the system that makes each individual stop or not stop.

The behavior of a single individual is aggregated thousands of times, millions, and thus you have stop signs (which in the US are mostly obeyed): a vast network of social, personal, political, economic and legal decisions that cause individuals to act in a certain way.

Impacts

To study the law and to just study how courts work and what judges say is to limit our understanding of the law, and in turn limit our ability to impact society. The law should be the study of how legal language, mechanisms, and institutions influence systems of human behavior.


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